Loved it )

Ah, the last line of this story's so... epic, lol. Yay! A happy ending! I like how Rebecca's back to her normal self again because to be honest, I didn't like her when she was all dark and evil and death-tainted. Lol.

Excellent story! Loved it!

I'm looking forward to (maybe?) reading something about Will and Elizabeth because they're absolutely cute with each other!

PS. Are you still thinking of doing a sequel to Accidental Angel? I'm looking forward to reading more about Amber and Calim, lol.

I loved the ending, it was perfect, don't think I wanted anything else. I may have hated the ending chapters, but it really came around to being what I liked in the beginning. Bravo!

-Alice

Gah I began crying coupled with a 'no no no no please no' when Rebecca said she wanted him to leave. Cried a little more at the end too if in part because it's over.

It could have an epliogue, a short flashforward or something, but as the ending of the main story I don't think anything needs to be added. Your idea for the prequel sounds good & I would love to read it.

Also, I don't know if it was your intention (:P) but I now love the song your story was named after. On many occasions when I listen to it (which is fairly frequently), I end up remembering many of the scenes I've imagined while reading this - which has got to be a pretty good indication that something went right with it!

Finally, good luck with the editing. You've got an amazing piece of work here, of which I've truely enjoyed every moment.

~Vorserkeien~

YAY ZOMG THAT ENDING WAS SO CUTE!

I liked that your bright the old Rebecca back, I just wish we could have seen a little more of her. I loved it. I don't really have much else to say other then to rain compliments down upon you. It was a good ending. I was really afraid you were going to end with them apart, THAT would have been tragic. I am looking forward to the rewrite. Good job!

Amazing. You ended this story so well. I don't think you should write an epilogue - it seems to end quite well the way it is now. Unless it is an 'over the hills and far away' sort of epilogue. I like the way the old Rebecca came back, and how they are finally together. The only thing was, I think you could have ended it when he found her. If she is able to stop him when he leaves. It gets a bit repetative. She leaves, he leaves, it drags just a slight bit. When you do the rewrite, please take it a bit slower from the visit to Greece. It seemed a bit rushed. Again though, I must say, this story was amazing. So very, very well done. I will miss reading it.

i do like the ending :) bravo!

(Claps) That was amazing. Your ending tied loose ends, but at the same time it left questions. That is how a story should end. I truly look forward to your next story.

8D

Oh my god, the cuteness!

8D

Aw, beautiful ending...who needs and epilogue with that? To be quite honest. It was so lovely.

yay yay yay, rebecca and James 4 eva! that was really good. Is it really over? i know the answer is yes, but i'm going to miss this story so much. Its not fair, still you have imprinted Rebecca and James into my imagination for ever. I want to read the story again when you done it again, and when you get it published, i can't see how you couldn't I am so buying it. I like the idea of a prequel that could be very good, and i like the idea of the over the hills and far away. Maybe if you did that you could have a scene where you see Rebecca and James or Will and Elizabeth in the background just in passing you know what i mean. If Rebecca and James don't win that comp i'm going to cry for you okay!

I still wish you would do a epiloque, don't diminish the idea straight away okay, consider it, you could do it a few years later or something, or just set the whole will and elizabeth scene or do a proloque for over the hills and far away.

I'm gonna miss this story, i enyoyed it so much.

I'm so gratefull you decided to write it.

Hazuki x x x

Aw how sweet, but how did Rebecca manage to get to his place before him?

Good chapter, im guessing the stories finished now, are you writing another one?

Speechless. :)

Is it the end, because I guess it could work. Pity though. I kinda wish they'd be air pirates agaiin. It would be oddly fitting. xDD

Very good story and I honestly enjoyed it. _

- HT

Good on her, you want James to get Rebecca back but you also want her to do what she enjoys, and she deserves to open her own shop. Any way not much to say, but update soon.