I really hope they get back together in the next chapter. There are some things about this that I am still not satisfied with (aka rebecca) but I am excited the end is near!

That was a really good chapter, i can't believe this story is almost over, i'm going to miss it so much. :( i can't believe Rebecca shot James! and i'm sorry that Caleb is dead, he didn't deserve to die. I hope things work out well for Rebecca, and i feel sorry for James as he obviously really loved her. I like this line ' Lost the girl," he mumbled. "Didn't even kiss the girl." ' a good line that, almost humourous , is that spelt right? hmm not sure never mind. a very very good chap this week i understand why you liked writing it. Please update soon, this story has me hooked, it is pure quality, you could definatly go far in the writing world. I hope you write a sequel at some point, i cant bear the thought that your not going to write any more, this is as good as Harry Potter, and i love Harry Potter.

Up date soon.

Hazuk -

FABULOUS!

AM I SO STUPID! Sorry misunderstanding, you're not who I think, SORRY. I'M SO SORRY!

wait a minute didn't I read this? I forgot...

heya! I figured since you read my stories, I'm readin yours! I like the start to this!

I liked reading this one! They were really drunk, weren't they? I'm very happy that Rebecca is turning back into her old self. I feel very sorry for James though, he can't be an air pirate...Well, at least with the help of his good friends he will try to get Rebecca back. Since there is only one chapter and and epilogue to go, will you clarify the feelings Rebecca has for James? I don't understand if she loves, hates, or is completely indifferent to the poor guy. I'd also be interested to see what happens with Will and Elizabeth. By the way, before anytime someone said Will or Elizabeth I would think of the Pirates of the Carribian movie, but now after reading your story I think of them. It shows what a good an author you are.

I can't believe it's almost over. Rule the World has been one of my favorite stories on Fictionpress. I am truly going to miss these characters. Great job RP, I truly look forward to your final chapter.

is ther going to be more? I would love to know about how this story ends!

this chappie was very sad for me for some reason...I hoped you meant it that way, and I'm just not some over-emotional fool. you've written this story very well, and I honest to goodness cannot figure out how you're going to finish everything up.

I have mixed feelings about Rebecca, only because I can't tell if she ever *really* loved James, before or after her "death". I hoped that is cleared up-it's been bothering me basically since I've started to read this story, four months back.

I love this story overall; to me it's kinda a mix between moulin rouge and stardust. I know, I'm odd. Keep up the awesome writing/updating!

... I'm confused. And pissed. Why was Rebecca acting like that? I don't understand why she is acting like a spoiled little kid! It isn't that she was brought back to life that is making her act like this. That just set her hedonistic side free. She is letting herself ruin the lives of those around her. I don't know how I can forgive either of them, or how they can forgive themselves. People, their friends, DIED because of them. And so what do they do? KEEP ON FIGHTING AND ACTING STUPID?

Geez... I hope both James and Rebecca stop acting crazy soon.

She shot him...

She left, betrayed, and then shot him.

Poor James. And he loves her so much. I really don't like this new Rebecca, but she is better than right after being brought back. It is good to see though that in this chapter she is regaining some of her old qualities, and the last gimmer of hope you left on the end - she loves him.

Good chapter,you are an amazing author and should get published.

Very Good confrontion between Rebecca and James. You feel sorry for her, but still proud of her standing up to her belifs with out seeming overtly annoying. I like the way you wrote this chapter keeps you wanting to read and find out what happens next. Keep updating please.

Wow. Definetely unexpected. But, there did have to be a confrontation. I look forward to your next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Aww! How sweet! So Rebecca still does love him! XD I'm glad that, even with her dark side, she's still got a heart. Lol, like I said before, I'm a sucker for romance. Please update soon!