Phoenix, when I first started reading your story I really really loved it. There was action (but nothing too crazy or stupid), romance (subtle, and I liked it. The fact that they were going so slowly but yet fast made you want to read), fantasy (woot, ships with wings) and characters that are different but you can relate to (James is the one I can relate with most). The godesses kind of ruined a part of it for me. There was no mention of any such things in the begging of the story, and I think if you were ever to put up an edit you should explain more of that supernatural higher being factor in the begging of the story as well. It just came out of nowhere. Also the way they make James and Rebecca be together, and Rebecca just blindly accepted it as if she didn't love James by herself but if the gods say then why not. I think you should have explained more of the fact that the gods just got them together on the ship and the battle, but the feelings they had for each other were genuine. Another thing. How dare they say your story is boring? They said they were bored...Such mean gods. I wasn't bored.

There is something that I wish to ask of you. I really liked the old Rebecca, she was just such a fresh and different character. Now that she is this kickass sort of girl I really don't like her so much, and this type of character has been used too much. I feel for poor story just isn't so interesting without her anymore, and I skim more than I read. Why did she run away? I think the running away came on too fast, without too much explanation. We just had to take your word for the fact that James was using her. Please, please, please bring back the old Rebecca. Can this new one be a sort of defence she was using, to try to sheild from the rest of the world and death but went too far? Maybe when she gets back to James and realizes how she feels she would drop the useless sheild?

Might you tell me about the national writing month you were talking about? What do you do?

I've fallen in love with the story. Please update soon and bring back Rebecca. Thanks again.

I totally enjoyed reading this! And although it took quite a while to catch up with you, because I'm a slow reader, I totally had fun! You should get published, you know. Update soon!

wow yet another great chapter, please up date soon, this is just so good! really! i love this, the chapter was really interesting and exciting, i can't wait to see what James does.

update soon pls, yes i know i already said , im saying it again. UPDATE! Hazuki x x x

I don't understand why Rebecca is being so weird. She isn't trying to be normal, she is letting herself be like this. It is a choice, not a fact.

Quite a cliff hanger. Still love this as it goes

Hm, an interesting chapter, i still can't wait to see them confront each other, but its good to see her character grow.

The dark really has changed her personality, although I can understand why she left. I applaude the depth and detail you put into your characters. I look forward to your next chapter.

To be honest, I really hate how you've changed the story. I liked it before Rebecca died, and now, I really just skim the chapter, heading straight to the ending to see if its gotten any better. Its a little upsetting because I loved this story so much before, and now it seems like its nothing like it. So I may continue to breeze through the chapters, but I hope it turns into a story I like again. Otherwise, maybe I'll wait until you've finished it, and just read the ending.

-Alice

Ahem.

-clears throat-

E!

And also NO! Because of Rebecca leaving for real. -nod-

What is Rebecca doing? STOP. Geez, she has been so stupid since she came back from the dead. I wish she would just get out of her own way.

Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I just caught up today. I don't really understand why Rebecca is leaving. Well, I understand WHY. But I think it is a stupid reason. James and Rebecca have some serious communication issues. I just want to lock them in a room together and leave them there until all their issues are worked out.

I don't know how often you update this story but I hope it'll be soon! I want to find out what happens next! I'm loving it so far!

ugh...too short [.

hmm im likin the new badass rebecca, but like most people..and james, i do miss her innocence tho.

just out of curiosity, how many chapters are left?

oh and post up the next chapter.

like...now.

how bout now?

...now?

This story is amazing! I did catch the reference to POTC. But, your characters are not like them. It's interesting howeven though you brought her back from the dead, she isn't herself completely. Good job on killing a cliche. I look forward to your next chapter.

Ack, sorry this is so late. I've been really busy lately and haven't been able to read any stories.

Wait...this sounds like it's going to have a tragic ending or something. With part of the darkness in Rebecca, and she's running away too. Hopefully Victoria can help somehow. XD

Update soon!

wow that was good i liked that, a good ending to complete the last chapter. i like the whole thing with the flags very effective.

please, pretty please update soon, please!

Hazuki x x x