Reviews for On the Bus
Lopeholt chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
This was catupured so well.

The feeling, I felt cold and tired, dead, like in the mornings.
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I added this to my favorite stories list and I'll tell you why.

You captured that bus-ish feeling perfecty-the waiting, the rain, the dead-eyed driver, the strange, hurt people. "What kind of world is this" summed it up fantastically.

Truly flawless, Summertime Poet.

-Shadow