Awww that was absolutely beautiful! And the proposal was so cute! i love it... Keep up the awesome work! :D xx

Honestly as much as I love Nate, I didn't really like Hannah so I didn't really enjoy their scenes as much as I enjoyed the scenes where Hannah wasn't the main focus, I personally wished the story had more Jess and Dan, that was the main reason I started reading the story because I got a glimpse of them in Mark and Nat's story and wanted to read further about them, see how they relationship progressed, I'm not saying I was disappointed but they did have considerably less scenes that Nate and Hannah and that left me kinda disheartened, however I'm glad they ended up with a happily ever after ... Jess deserves it!

great story. i liked the plot (Hannah et Nate) and the subplot (Jess et Dan) my french is not that good (oui oui) but thats besides the point which is i always appreciate your stories.

-Sincerely from deep in the heart of Africa-
-AceTheClown-
-Nairobi-

Cute! I love reading about Nat and Mark. They're my favorite Zephyr's pair. There's just something very attractive about nice guys.

But Nate is a good character too. He and Hannah are adorable together.

naw, so sweet! but the end of the zephyr stories? that's sad. i like these stories. great job!

LOL! i love mark and nat! their story was my fave

i didn't like hannah in the beginning.. but she's growing on me lol

hehe. hello :)

I decided that I have the time to read and so I am. But I hope I can stop myself whenever I need to unlike the other one. haha. :D

w00t. Once again another awesome story to add to my favorite list. I can't wait to read more. Yet I'm sad that I've nearly finished reading all your work.

Yup, good ending to that series.

Off to your other stories now. Don't mind my addict-ness.

Thank you for the excellent reading material.

Alice Heist

I'm a big hockey fan and absolutely loved this story! It was really cute and well-written! :)

P.S. Love your other stories too but this one is my favorite!

I love this sentence:

"Hannah didn’t know what happened next. One minute she was telling him that he couldn’t come inside, then he was inviting himself to dinner, and she was actually cooking for him – she wasn’t a world class chef, but the food was good anyway – then they were arguing over something or other, and then they were naked and fighting over who got to be on top."

I just have to smile.

So I read all your Zephyr stories and realized that I hadn't reviewed any of them. Sorry! So I love them, especially Mark and Nathalie's story. Although I very much like Nate, too. Thank you for sharing!

aw this is another amazing one ]

good chapter keep it up