Reviews for The Lemon Garden
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
This is very good - I liked how you made the images very vivid in this poem. You do have a way with words xD
imcherish08 chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Hmm... this one i had to think harder, i love a challenge though...

Here's what i got from it:

Perhaps lemons and potatoes represent goals... and that and the one with "dirty fingernails" is saying that your goals (lemons) aren't good enough and that you should change your goals to "potatoes" because they think they're better.

I hope i got that right... so much thought XD Good Job!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Wow. Surreal in some ways, but evocative and thought-provoking. It seems kind of feverish, like it goes so fast and one can only catch a glimpse of what it's saying. Hidden meaning, I suppose. I like the cryptic tragedy of the piece and the story behind the piece, which seems to be left partially untold.

This has also prompted me to look up what exactly it means for something to be in Sapphic verse.

Good, intriguing poem.