beautifully real... and really beautiful.

bloody brilliant especially the part about the caffine induced haze.

beautiful. the idea that lonliness bleaches somebody is as striking as it is true.

yes, i liked it.

It's hard to explain, but...

I've felt this. There's a lot of relevance in this poem, and to use one of your words, yearning. Very good display of full-hearted pain, if that makes any sense.