Cute, very cute. I enjoyed it.

This was AMAZING. It also sounds like a great way to cap off my senior year. Hope you don't mind, but I'm gonna steal this game and put it to practical use.

Haha, your story made me appreciate gummy bears a little more than I did. I loved it. Another well written SKoW challenge. (;

i loved it

you are one very good writing

xobellajaneo

L.M.F.A.O.

genius. loved the story.

Oh, this is officially my favorite thing EVER. I loved it, I really did.

The characters are quirky, original, and well-developed even in so short a time.

Plus, you're hilarious!

Great, really great.

~Jules

HAHAHAHA! excellent response challenge! had me grinning all the way ;)

it was really sweet - yet sexy as hell at the same time *fans herself*

Omg, you sent me into fits of stifled-laughter with this little bit of awesomeness: "You’re like a gummy bear – you’re cute, a little odd, and unbelievably delicious, and right now all I want to do is suck on your—“ . . . my family thinks I'm insane now. :) loved it!

hilarious...I loved it

I would have to say that this is the BEST one shot I have ever read. It was amazing and I loved it like you wouldn't even begin to imagine. Great work!

That was an awesome story. I swear, this site is like crack for 13 year old girls, and I'd thought I'd gotten over my addiction 3 years ago. Your story proved otherwise, single-handedly taking away 3 years of maturity from my brain. Or maybe it's just too good for this site?

Lol lol lol! I liked it very much! I pity gummy bears, they're so cute, it makes me sad to rip their heads off their little bodies! I prefer gummy snakes, lol!

Brilliant.

Wonderfully written. I loved the creative plot! Taking the hide-and-seek game to a grand scale. It sounds so frivolous and exciting, and it makes me want to take part in the game too. The sexual tension was fabulous! Absolutely brilliant! I really enjoyed reading this one.