|Reviews for The Eleventh Annual Hide Or Die Summer Challenge|
| The Smile Machine chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
So. I read this a long time ago, and I was blown away. So I wonder why I never reviewed. Here it is: Charlie is smokin' and Adelaide is laugh-inducing. Also, you have a way with words that has me wriggling in anticipation here.
I read your other stories, and I think they're beautifully executed. I was never able to read your longer stories, but I'm pretty sure of your writing ability by now.
Anyway. Amazing. I hope you write another one-shot as hot as this one again.
| happyepicurean chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
haha this story is so funny and sexy at the same time. I love your detailed description of the characters. It really furthers the character development of Adelaide. She made me laugh a lot "it'll save me money on birth control." I feel the line "you're like a gummy bear" was kind of sudden, but then I guess she really liked him and all of a sudden wanted to further their relationship. I kind of wish that Charlie was further developed and we get to see what kind of boyfriend he would make aside from the PDA. I thought the fact that he made the first move was pretty interesting... I want to see what else pulls the characters together besides sexual attraction. But for a one shot, this is pretty amazing!
| freakyzoe chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
GYAAAAAAA! I want to read charlie's POV!
| breathoflavender chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
OMGGG. THIS IS SUCHHHHHHH A GOOD ONE SHOT. NO DOUBT MY FAVOURITE.
this is dman hilarious and sweet that i was laughing to myself throughout.
I LOVE the interation between the brothers and Adelaide.
| DofD chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
-insert heart here-
| Contemporary.Jane chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
this is straight-up one of my FAVORITE one-shots on FP. thanks sooo much for not taking it down! :)
it's reallyyy good.
| Cheryl White chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Shit. I absolutely loved it, you naughty girl! HAHAAHHAHAHAHAA. )) It kept me laughing the whole time, and I just adore your characters. HAHAHAA. I love the way you write too - not boring at all, very telling and concise, perfect grammar, and amazing choice of words! I LOVED THIS. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. Hihihi.
| aimlessmuse chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I saw this on the favorites page of another author, and I have to say, this is one of the best one-shots I've read on FP. Charlie and Addles ooze chemistry and sexual tension, and the story is both light-hearted and passionate. You've got real talent. :)
| youngin-matomon chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
| Robin Leigh chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Cool story! :) I like how it's written, and the plot is nice.
| Gracelin chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
LOVED everything. This story is just too fun! Loved Addles, loved her name, loved her and Erin, and of course, loved how forward Charlie was. Mm mm m.
| khristiya chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
definitely love unresolved sexual tensions! it's awesome and a bit sadistic and cute and i totally adore those moments! ahaha
I love the characters and the plot and generally everything. i love how hide and seek became an ultimate battle of sexes which i would have definitely joined if given the chance. hehe. and i surely love the wicked, sexy, beautiful and totally hot Harris family genes! they make life so exciting. i wish i have a Charlie in my pocket...
love it! awesome! funny and definitely a wonderful read. good job!
i am so lovin you dear author!
| WinterInk24 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Wow. When you said there was going to be lots of sexual attraction and tension...you weren't kidding. :D Charlie and Addles are so cute together. And Charlie sounsd like such a stud. I want my own Charlie. Great writing. Its always fun to read about a good prank war.
| reindrops chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Oh, I loved it.
| NeverHeardOfYou chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I love this oneshot. It's hilarious and crazy. Crazy good! XD
The idea of the annual hide or die summer challenge is awesome.