Reviews for The Eleventh Annual Hide Or Die Summer Challenge
leavemeialone chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Oh my gosh, this story is so awesome. I love Charlie and Adelaide. At first, I thought she was going to get with the cashier. Dude, Charlie sounds so hot. You are such a great writer and make the characters seem so loveable and fun to read. Also, I want to say that I LOVE GUMMY BEARS. And, after reading this, I so would want to have an annual hide or die summer challenge.
Anara Celebvilya chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
That was hilariously awesome! I love this story, it made me laugh the entire time I was reading it. Your characters are all so real. Thanks for keeping me entertained!

Liz
PotOfGoldXxx chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
That awesome one shot was pure genius.
Yomi14 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
This One-Shot is incredible, it has to be one of the best that I've read so far. It's amazing the amount of sexual tension there is between the two character. There isn't any grammar errors which simmply makes the story more enjoyable. One of the things I would have liked to read as a flashback would have been Charlie's and Adelaide's first kiss. Other than that all I have to say amazing.
lrstar123 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
wow! the tension between the two main character's was intense! You can always do the best one-shots, I always love them! I think this one is my favourite from you, it had just enough humour to make me laugh, and just enough tension to make me wish that the story would end just so the characters could get together!

You may want to consider making this a full story and not just a one-shot. I think if you did flashbacks between the previous challenges and such you'd be able to draw out the story and add more detail.

Keep on churning out one-shots! You've got a real talent :)
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I remember this story!

I've been looking for good stories to read for a while now.

I came across this one again and decided to read it again cause it was so awesome like the first time )
Insanity.prone chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I LOVE
Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Super, super cute! :) I love it! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl
lulu.lemon chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Totally loved this! Smiled the whole way through. You have an awesome writing style. I liked how the friendship between Adelaide and Erin was very, very real. And I actually found myself really wishing I could be there playing with them too :p

Awesome job!
swimmer4life chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
When I read this story, I immediately went back to the top to read it again! It has become one of my favorite one-shots because it's humorous, playful, and utterly romantic.
Odalisquia chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I cannot explain how much I loved this story XD

Usually I don't like sexual stories/MCs, but I seriously enjoyed this one. Adelaide (Addles?) was hilarious, Charlie was-er, libidolicious-and the whole premise of the Hide Or Die Summer Challenge was just so original and creative. I wish I could participate in something like that, haha.

Flawless spelling/grammar, nice job! In conclusion: great great great story. Now, off to read more of yours!
Natasha Dust chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
That was funny! Hilarious actually! *lol*

Now, I'm extremely curious about the other Harris' (men) lovelives! *giggles*

I wodner if you made fics about theirs too... *hopefully goes to your profile*
breatheyou7 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
haha, great one-shot. totally hot. xD
Ryhona chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Feel the heat! Adelaide (whew, I had to actually go and look up how to spell that!) was flirty, fresh, and fun! I love the chemistry between her and Charlie!
Genato chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
the girls should have won! :)) Very, very nice. The sexual tension had me smirking all the way. :))
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