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   dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008 [just like the fault lines/built into the perfection of the earth] I love this line. Very interesting simile. I didn't like your capitolization, though. It seems strange without punctuation. Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile) |
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 simple and effective, i know the feeling. |
| Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 A great piece of work! I love the raw emotion and word choice! Dreaming Chica |
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 Great poem, the 2nd stanza is my favorite of this piece. Keep it Up! |