Reviews for flaw
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
[just like the fault lines/built into the perfection of the earth] I love this line. Very interesting simile.

I didn't like your capitolization, though. It seems strange without punctuation.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
simple and effective, i know the feeling.
Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
A great piece of work! I love the raw emotion and word choice!

Dreaming Chica
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Great poem, the 2nd stanza is my favorite of this piece. Keep it Up!