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![]() ![]() ![]() [just like the fault lines/built into the perfection of the earth] I love this line. Very interesting simile. I didn't like your capitolization, though. It seems strange without punctuation. ~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile) |
![]() ![]() ![]() simple and effective, i know the feeling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great piece of work! I love the raw emotion and word choice! Dreaming Chica |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem, the 2nd stanza is my favorite of this piece. Keep it Up! |