Reviews for A Vampire's Property |
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![]() ![]() ![]() s submissive already? awe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! not chandika! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh snap! didn't see that coming! wereleapard, how cool! i wish i had a kitty tail. it's funny how they were lovers, and then the chapter ends with "i hate werecreatures" lol,l ike ironic. though if i knew her, i'd prolly hate her to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Girl power! She almost had the las word there, too. darn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() teehee, they had seks. so now she's his angel... hmm, i'm detecting a crush. or a dominating relationship where he doesn't give a damn. lol max says hi |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, evil vampire. very marvelous, i love him because he's a vampire, but man is he a meenie! lol, poor gal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh...oor Joshua -gives him a hug- what a meenie is Declan. ooh, but i'm not liking this Chandika (even though its a cute name. reminds me of a pokemon) even more. lol, i shall keep reading, before Max takes back his laptop and i have nothing to do but watch him play kun foo on the ps2. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice fight scene. I think it's funny that he cares what Chandika thinks after she tried to kill him. ;) Nice work. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just read your posted chapters and i really like them. you have created a good mix with a little twist on the ever popular idea of vampire stories as your story involves more then just the kidnapper and the kidnappee. good job and keep up the good work, but don't bother checking my page i like reading but not much of a writer...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Kadar, lol. Declan pwns wereleopards! Tight chapter. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Declan! *does happydance* Chandika really is...um yeah not going to say the word, but yeah. Another great update:)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I can't wait for you to update! -Raven |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice addition. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel very sorry for this girl. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It looks as if she has been saved. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |