Reviews for Oakland, At Last
Mad Asher chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Lol what..Oakland is a cat? Anyway I liked the conversations between them, pretty funny. I like how Oakland refers to Deth's phone as having a "fat ass cord" as compared to a cell phone. I think you're trying to portray Deth as a loser? Anyway nice name, 'oakland' I likeed your story.