|Reviews for NonConsensual Love|
| A.Spark chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
How can I say this without offending any one and making myself an ass? I consider this as I write to say that I'm slightly bothered by the glaring racism that is coming from the main character. He has no filter. My god. I'm offended as unreasonable as that might sound. And it's only the first half of chapter one! I've never heard of an interracial relationship that begun on the ground of very racist mentalities. But, you haven't lost me. I appreciate good inventive prose and great stories.
| Julia Dawn chapter 8 . 8/10/2013
Loved the ending! I liked that there wasn't an infatuation between Sno and Ryan, that the age difference made Ryan seek somebody closer to his age, but that Sno wasn't cut out of the picture either.
| Tiffany Lindley chapter 8 . 3/15/2013
I really enjoyed reading this story. Its sweet and sexy and a little romantic. If there's more I'd be interested in reading it.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/16/2013
That ending... oh gosh
| Emerald Mist1 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I love this story, I read it two years ago on my way home. It took me that long to find it again lol
| Da'ad chapter 8 . 7/14/2012
Oh that was amazing! For so many reasons such as plot, writing style, characters (freaking everyone!), pace, the hot sex...ahhhh.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
Oh my GAWD! That was an intense mix of sweet, hot, illuminating and just plain adorable!
| Ephira chapter 8 . 6/16/2012
This is so really good. Not only is the story really sexy, but in a few chapters, the whole taboo about pedophilia is approached, the veil on elderlies' sex life is lifted and some clichés about 'black' people are addressed too. But above all, the fact that this relationship is very much like one of pederasty in ancient Greece makes it all the more worth the read : it was like reading a diary written by an eromenos or something. And in eight chapters only! It's amazing. And touching.
| anonymous chapter 8 . 3/29/2012
| AdriannaRomantica chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
You were right, you did manage to make a cute story out of a pedophile! This story was unexpected, I mean halfway through I was like "Aww, they are so gonna end up together, fuck going back home" and then Evan came back. It was actually really cute, another story down...eight to go haha
| AnimeFreak4Life chapter 8 . 11/30/2011
awesome i love this fic so much well done
| Satellite-Princess chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
I like...Update Soon!
| Feeshes chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Hah, I read this one forever ago too.
The end is hilarious... What kinda dude brings his boyfriend to get screwed by a fatherly like figure that you sorta... sold your body to... I think Ryan lost his mind somewhere along the story.
His sisters must have a VARY different view of him after that trip.
Dude, I just heard the line 'I can show you how to hump, without makin' love' I should really stop listening to Hollywood Undead. You tune into the strangest things. XD
| Ioga chapter 8 . 4/23/2011
Finished. Aw, this was so cute. And educational! Not only did I learn new vocabulary (yay for frottage), I learned some anatomy and sailing things. Thanks for doing the research! I didn't quite find myself sufficiently interested to pay attention to the motorcycle bits but I was trying to keep track of what they were actually doing in the boat at different times. Didn't manage to hang on all the time but learned something nevertheless.
And Sno got all cuter as the story progressed. Aww. The finishing touch was just dreamy.
Minor nitpicks: Sometimes, the tense fluctuates in the story. In ch. 1, it's mostly past tense at first, like "He threw me a plain white t-shirt." but after a - transition, starting "After dinner, ..." it turns to present tense ("he says") before shifting back to past tense; early chapter 7 it's present tense for a moment again, but ch 8 starts in past tense before the whole story ends in present tense again. Smaller bits: ch 3: "He says if that if the salt water dries on your skin, it'll itch like crazy." - this is true, but it sounds a bit like Sno said it in you-as-in-narrator ("...dries on my skin..") and not in you-passive. "THAT isnew." - is new, ch 4: "be marooned all by yourselves my country" in, ch 6: cloths off - clothes.
Thanks for this!
| Ioga chapter 2 . 4/21/2011
I don't generally leave reviews before I'm done with a story one way or the other, but I just got off a chapter break and was coming to review other stuff and I just HAD to start with some pon-pon-waving woots: A good Stockholm Syndrome fic! Woohoo! Just wandered in through a favourite on Fictionpress, and got lucky.
I personally think male-male (or androgyn-male) may attract people who don't particularly swing that way because it's a bit more taboo (/naughty), and a bit feistier a power struggle maybe, considering the old tradition of submissive females. No deeper theory though; I personally like unusual relationships of pretty much all sorts because of the extra psychological twist. Or so I tell myself. ;)
Thanks for this, now I probably have to read all you other stuff too.