|Reviews for essence of hope|
| helixdown chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Hm? Was this one a continuation of "let's just call this a dream" ?
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
aw nice ending. i love your imagery in this it really made certain parts pop out.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
I love the whole explosion thing. That was a really beautiful image. I also really like the parenthesis... the only thing I might work on is the punctuation. You have a bunch of periods and I think they look a bit weird in the parenthesis and they also do not always separate sentences. And sometimes you have sentences missing periods. Anyhow other than that, it's a great piece
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
good piece, I really liked it :)
| unshattered chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I love how this starts off with such despair then leads towards hope. Great transition.
You're very creative with your writing :)
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
this is beautiful.
...idk how else to describe this.
yours until the wind changes,