Reviews for Candid Moments
Triangle chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
I really enjoyed the twist in the ending. I didn't actually expect him to suddenly turn around and say he'd be going to! :P

My relationship with my bf is pretty much pure cheesiness and cliche, so I can actually see some realism to the ending. xD

Lovely writing style, too. You're brilliant. :)
234235134 chapter 1 . 5/9/2010

I really like the line "Then I'll marry you, and you don't have to do a thing except for loving me… And making me breakfast."

Cecily Mitchell chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Most def cute :P
Elle Winters 9 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
) that was so sweet.

the name reminds me of the evil LOTR guy though.
Artume chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Aw, that was so sweet! I loved it! It was so cute! Loved it! Actually, it is much better than I expected...the summary put me off so many times. BUt, it was worth reading, I'm really glad that I did!
WithEveryReason chapter 1 . 1/31/2010

So perfect.
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Aw.. That's so cute!) Sweet!
LyBhing chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
That's incredibly cute. [teary eyes] .
itsVKEE chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
this is soo cute. i'm sure those are tears that are running down my left cheek right now. naw it's so sweet. i love the bit where he farts. i laughed so hard my dad asked me what was wrong with me XD
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Ohmygosh I'm actually breathless!

It was so beautiful
Ayla Gray chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Your stories are so cute they make me wish I had childhood biffles
Single White Rose chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
oh my gosh, my heart feels like it's a giant pile of mush. all i want to do is go "aww" and giggle. that was such an adorable story!
piggyboo chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
So cute and sweet. I like cheesy stuffs, they never fail to entertain me.
QuickSilverSand chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
aww...very cute!

i loved both of them

very nice...i'm liking the geeky heroes of your stories more than the supposedly "gorgeous" unrealistic arrogant jerks of other stories...good job
dark jam chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
It's cheesy! It's super duper cheesy!

But what the heck? I love cheese! And cliches and other sappy things! Haha, sweet of him to message her like that!

Sigh, happy endings. Gotta love em :D
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