very sweet.

liked the story, i believed the characters. i cared for them.

Aw! *explodes from the lovey dovey*

This is awesome! Brilliant! Implosive? . Uh, I would add more but then I'd need to be smart for that. Anyways, this was just great! And it totally made my day!

I really enjoyed the twist in the ending. I didn't actually expect him to suddenly turn around and say he'd be going to! :P

My relationship with my bf is pretty much pure cheesiness and cliche, so I can actually see some realism to the ending. xD

Lovely writing style, too. You're brilliant. :)

IT'S SO SWEET! I LOVE THE ENDING!

I really like the line "Then I'll marry you, and you don't have to do a thing except for loving me… And making me breakfast."

XD

Most def cute :P

) that was so sweet.

the name reminds me of the evil LOTR guy though.

Aw, that was so sweet! I loved it! It was so cute! Loved it! Actually, it is much better than I expected...the summary put me off so many times. BUt, it was worth reading, I'm really glad that I did!

Aw.

So perfect.

Aw.. That's so cute!) Sweet!

That's incredibly cute. [teary eyes] .

this is soo cute. i'm sure those are tears that are running down my left cheek right now. naw it's so sweet. i love the bit where he farts. i laughed so hard my dad asked me what was wrong with me XD

Ohmygosh I'm actually breathless!

It was so beautiful

Your stories are so cute they make me wish I had childhood biffles

oh my gosh, my heart feels like it's a giant pile of mush. all i want to do is go "aww" and giggle. that was such an adorable story!

So cute and sweet. I like cheesy stuffs, they never fail to entertain me.