WAH! This is too adorable!

I love how the couples in your stories have a great friendship as well as love, how they grow up together, how they banter and tease each other and know each other inside out. I believe that makes for a beautiful, lasting relationship. I can see Ashton and Alicia as white-haired grandparents.

Oh my gosh this was the cutest story I've ever read... and I loved the ending! The story was cheesy, but cheesy can be good, and this would be one of those times. So cute! Thanks for writing something so good!

ah adorable ] lol and very interesting summary

Love the story! It's so cute.

*sigh*

I love Ashton.

Ri

this is awesome! you should so totally write a sequel type thing - that would be excellent! great job :)

Aw... I LOVED IT. It might have been cliche, but not too much. You write it so that I didn't know what was going to happen at all times. Good job. :D

Aww! Loved the ending! Cute oneshot!

HAHA

very cheesy!

but thats what we love!

great job .

Well written. I love it. It shows how love can't break them apart huh?

Oh. Wow. that was soo cute! and you wrote it so beautifully! wow.. speechless! so cute!

Oh my goodness.

Lovely, as simply as I can put it. Completely adorable to say the least; and undeniable sweet and beautiful. I completely adored it, and I thought you did absolutely wonderful. I truly loved this one, and I hope to read your others soon and see that they are just as good.

Which I have no doubt of them being. :]

I don't care if it was cheesy/cliched- I loved it! *SQUEE* AW! Incredibly sweet! Man, I seriously love your one-shots! That's it. You're definitely favourited.

gulistanlik

SO PERFECT

so perfect

If only life were like that.

Ugh, I'm so jealous of your writing skills

SUPER CUTE

I LOVE IT

aw...that was really touching...it's a good read, common in the clique but it's an ultra read. brought tears to my eyes V.V