Reviews for Candid Moments
Incurable Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
LOL. XD Only you could make a character that farts so disgusting and so lovable at the same time. That was so cute. I didn't expect the ending at all. It was beautiful, and it really made my afternoon. Thank you! )
CuteButPsycho27 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Incredibly cheesy but SO DAMN ADORABLE! Made me smile and go "aww" multiple times. Nice job.
littlemissmuffet chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
i loved it!

some stories i read move the story on too quickly, but even though yours fly through the years, it didn't seem to be rushing anything at all [i think maybe it was because you focus on small moments and draw them out with details]

the ending is a tad cheesy and abrupt though.. but maybe it's just me.

i still like it!
dontneedyou chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I really liked it. You had a few mistakes but, it's all good. :)
Noie chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Very very cute. I love fluff! Thanks for posting,
JammyMacca chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
That was so cute, its put me in such a better mood -
jyska chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
OMG SO CUTE!

Loved the I thought you did a really good job with the way they talk and think throughout their ages. Im always really bad at trying to remember how I acted so young. Good job!

Very good one shot!
Unsociably Acceptable chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
aw! that's so sweet!xDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxDxD...ect...dude! i'm supposed to be depressed today! that's not helping me in my depression!
xjennnny chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
it was adorable ;] hehe ilovedit( ultra cheesy but its a romance stoy youu know? who caresxD
mia5081 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
It was sweet and cute, and I totally loved it )

Great job!

Mia
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