Reviews for she's screaming for redemption
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
YES

McKinley
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Unique and solid imagery, great word choice- I thought this was a fantastic haiku. Keep up the good work!

-D.S
012323232 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
i love this
diffident chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
This haiku is so violent... I can't help but love it.

marie
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
the imagery and metaphors are just stunning.
ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
concisely put.

i like the thing you say about the horizon, i never thought of it that way before. as if the days resist turning anew, again and again.
chris spits venom chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
no criticisms here, just wanted to tell you that this is a very well written haiku. nice job.