Reviews for Dark Vignette
me. moi. ich chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
i like the way you separate that one stanza from the others- like a little side note/thought.. very nice
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/30/2008

I especially like the fact that those lines (Wait... what?) are off to the side. To me, it's almost like an after-thought, a whisper, as if the narrator steps aside for a moment to 'consult' with himself.

Did you intend it that way?