Reviews for My First Kiss and Other Tragic Tales |
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![]() ![]() O.M.G. when you mentioned the hottie's hypnotic blue eyes I nearly ripped my shirt off! 3 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far . Write another chapter soon please ? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have to update soon,, its been awhile :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! I love how the characters are so blind and the way you write makes it sound like its really happening to real people right now! this message was brought to you by the sometimes random genius of... ~proud-rider-of-the-short-bus (piece for your thoughts- "you're only as sane as the voices in your head" By- ME!) (came up with it today) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant believe shes just his cousin! i agree with liz, what a let down! cant wait till you next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Liz. She seemed so pathetic and hormonal this chapter. Does she usually swear that much? I found the GD swears especially harsh. You captured well a teen girl's angst. FYI, "deluded" is when you are deceived or delusional, whereas "diluted" is when ice melted into your drink. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! It's 4:30 in the morning and here I am just finishing this! It's so interesting(: I just couldn't stop reading! I really hope you put the whole thing on here :( I don't know what I would do if you just left me hangin,haha! This is really great...update soon,please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well to be fair to Ryan, he did order French Toast at the *International* House of Pancakes. French Toast is international, isn't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love you to pieces for wrting the wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I love Ryan! He's so cute and cool! He reminds me a lot of my brother Ryan. It's weird. OH! Miranda's his cousin? Really? :D YAY! Update update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. the mysterious girl from ryan's past. getting all twisted now! cant wait:) update soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your sense of humor comes through strongly in this chapter. The description of family dinners was very funny. Not sure Liz would have actually relaxed when Ryan kisses her ear. You need to watch spelling (receipt) etc. I love reading your stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! i cant wait till the next update. theres one thing i found that didnt make sense: a few chapters ago (i cant remember when) Ellen and Tom ditched Chelseas party to go for their 5 month anniversary, but then three days late you said they had their 6 month anniversary... yeah.. anyway, i love it still! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ryan is such a sweet guy:) he's like every girl's dream type of guy.:) great story so far.:) keep it up:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter though I didn't realize she'd left her house and gone to school for a couple of paragraphs. Maybe I read it too fast. As for spilling your drink, as a family member I doubt I would have told you to learn how to drink but I most certainly would have laughed. :P |