Reviews for Antietam
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! (link in profile)

I really like your idea. I haven't read a whole lot of Civil War fics, but I've never come accross one like this for what it's worth. However, I think this was very rushed and could have used a lot more to it. Right now it's basically "A girl sneaks of to war without anyone noticing her. She gets shot, a boy kisses her, then they both die." This is really the kind of story that should be stretched into a multi-chapter. In that, Jessie's character should be established more firmly. Tell a bit more about her omother other than thefact that she died. What was her relationship like before she went off to war? How has the war effected her? Does anyone suspect her of being a girl? Things like that. This really has the potential to be a good story if you give ita pus in the right direcion ]