Reviews for London
astral boy chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Hehe, wanderlust indeed.

Well I should say, some parts of this seemed a bit forced, such as the "socket" line. But it's sort of one of those simple, heartfelt pieces so I think it gets away with it. It makes a nice song, not just because of the repeated verses and rhymes, although they help with the inside-the-head reading, but because of the simplicity. They're just my thoughts.

So, ah, well done! And thanks so much for your review.