|Reviews for Almost There, Going Nowhere|
| Evanescent October chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I'm sorry, that's the only word that's coming to me right now, lol.
| Indicates chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
This is a really good short story. I really like the connections between Wolfe and Vincent-they don't necesarily like each other, but they benefit being in a group which is an odd interaction that is never really captured. This is a story that I read again and again, because it really is that good. the languague isn't overdone and it's a shame it's just a one-shot.
| Sameisauce chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
| Ocean Owl chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Wow. I have to tell you that this is one of my favorite stories on fictionpress. I keep coming back to it wondering what I should say. I love the your characterizations, especially the way you've described Patrick, and the strength and personalities of Vincent and Wolfe really come through. The flashbacks fit in flawlessly with the entire story, especially how you end it with one. I love the last paragraph, it seems to sum up the story better than just ending it with the shooting. Anyway, this is a great story you have here. I'm glad I found it.
| anon chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
i found this to be very intersesting..
maybe you could continue this somehow...?
i really loved it and it has so much potential to maybe... continue...
i think that'd be pretty sweet.