Reviews for Four Simple Steps |
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![]() ![]() I didn't like the style of writing you used in this story, I found it was a little choppy but the story line is good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moral learned! To get a hot boyfriend let your bestfriend buy you a dress, wear it and go to Starbucks and drink cofee ;) I would have done that but I have 2 problems.. 1. We don't have Starbucks in this area 2. I don't like cofee :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would you really hurt the man of your dreams just because it's April's fool? I think I won't. Still, nice work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Escpecially the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was your first story i read which was in the guy's POV :P And, like i've said a million times in your story reviews, CUUTE! lol :P xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute, love it:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! It's so sweet! The twist in the end was really good. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh the ending was cruel, but cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, that was adorable! i totally didn't look at the date this was posted, so i was like... OH, at the end. xD very cute! -toffeecakesxox. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH so cute! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one! The ending could have been a little bit "fluff-ier" though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. nice ending |
![]() ![]() That was SO cute~! Your ending was definitely a twist. I mean, first she says no, but then it's April Fools! Very creative, yes, yes. I love your stories, so keep 'em coming! |