Reviews for Translation
DemonBunny205 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Very confudeling. But it's really good.
Scottish Princess chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I like this one, too, I just don't quite understand how the last two lines go together. You say:

"Writing, typing, posting up, translations,

of my feelings I must."

I think it might be better if you changed it to something like this:

"Writing, tpying, posting up,

translations, of my feelings."

But, again, I like it. The honest simplicity of it all. No elaborate words, but you still get your emotions and your point across. Well done.