Reviews for Gee, I Really Wish This Had A Title But Oh Well
Frank Fry chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
I really enjoyed this, but your last two lines totally blew me out of the water. That's a beautifully poignant ending. Well played.
lilyashes chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I love the descriptions you used, things that most people would never think of. I especially liked your description of his accent; not many stories bring that up at any point, and I really felt a little twinge when I read that part.
Ginnysing chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
There is a sweetness in this story that I feel could only be captured in the shortness of a one shot, and you captured it straight away. I loved it. Please keep writing, you inspire me every time.
RamenGirl chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
gabby, this was wonderful. i knew i would love it when i read the description. i just read it out loud to rene and he loves it too. gah fuckin' research paper.
xMy-Chemical-Writingx chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I really liked this. Very descriptive and emotional. Great job :)
lulu511 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Oh, this is so good! And yet so sad... I thought the bit about the butterflies was really ingenious. Great job! :p