Reviews for Gee, I Really Wish This Had A Title But Oh Well |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this, but your last two lines totally blew me out of the water. That's a beautifully poignant ending. Well played. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the descriptions you used, things that most people would never think of. I especially liked your description of his accent; not many stories bring that up at any point, and I really felt a little twinge when I read that part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is a sweetness in this story that I feel could only be captured in the shortness of a one shot, and you captured it straight away. I loved it. Please keep writing, you inspire me every time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gabby, this was wonderful. i knew i would love it when i read the description. i just read it out loud to rene and he loves it too. gah fuckin' research paper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this. Very descriptive and emotional. Great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is so good! And yet so sad... I thought the bit about the butterflies was really ingenious. Great job! :p |