Reviews for i'll be that girl
hobocamp chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
i think this is gorgeous. the imagery is fantastic. a thrum of water against glass - it is such a vivid and powerful beginning. i don't know if you need "boxed" and "squared" both, but i could see you repeating the imagery for power. either way, keep it up!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I love the juxtaposition of being gussied up and ruined at the same time. The abrupt end is perfect.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
I love the similie you use to describe your hair and I also love the description in the second and third line. Really beautiful piece.