I think it was great. It's unique...guy changes his life in one day. Good job!

Well, uhh I have definite mixed feelings. I am not sure I became attached to any characters. To be honest I am in doubt if I am truly invested in Andy either as a character. I am not sure this can even be classified as a romance. I'd say more drama, I felt that the romance portion was just a small portion of the story, and not even why I kept on reading it in the end. Ryan didn't seem invested in the relationship and Andy well I felt that it was "puppy love" with infatuation.

There is a part of me, that feels like if I was Ryan I would feel responsible for my mother's death and partly blame Andy. I don't blame him for cutting off contact at the end either. Though I am not sure it is part of Ryan's character to write a letter, he seemed more straightforward from his previous actions and talking.

I guess I just didn't feel the spark or romance really. I was not really rooting for their relationship at all. Over all I liked the drama of it. There is a part of me that really didn't care for any characters except for Naomi, and I find that weird since I read it cause it was slash.

Oh shoot! o

OH GOD POOR ANDY. D:

Yea story is a bit boring.

I like the plot to the story but i feel like your taking to long to get to the point and its dragging on with random moments with other chartecters rather then with andy and ryan. Idk im just getting a bit bored

I really loved this story but absolutely hated the last few chapters, especially how it ended

this had a sad ending, but I certainly says it's a good job. I read this fic up to the last chapter for two nights just to finish this. Setting aside spelling errors and mis-usage of words, I fell in love with this story.

I'ma admit it. At the end I sat there and blubbered like a baby and ranted about sad story endings to my brother .

But, I do think it was a really good way to end the story, and it's realistic. The whole story was fantastic - I just sat down and read beginning to end, which is a compliment because its midnight where I live and I haven't started any of the stuff I was supposed to do XD

Actually its also a compliment that you got me this emotionally invested in your characters...

*sniff*

I'm off to the sequel.

hell, just when I'm starting to tell myself "time to go to bed now..." . *hits next chapter button*

i just found this a few days ago and i abso fucking lutly love it. i am off to go read the sequel i love this and you for writing it. XD O.O hope i didnt sound a little creep there...

nice chp, i like andy's character since he reminds me of my friend who no matter what i said was always there keep it up. also is that what being a jock is like? i thought they liked being cool and stuff like that, guess the stereotype is wrong.

wow i thought this be so stereotype attemp at writing but riding this first chapter shows some pontential. can't wait to see where this is going as long as it's not the standard yaoi high school stereotype i see alot. not trying to flame you or nothing just opionion

This story is absolutely amazing, you should try to publish some of your stories.

EK!

i love it! perfect first chapter!