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![]() ![]() ![]() Because, like, ZOMG! Lord of the Rings is friggen' AWESOME! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter hope u update soon its going on my favorites and it was the best story I've read in a while :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not meaning to be bitchy in any way. The story is great so far and I'm eager to read more. However, in the future, look for spelling and grammar. " |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me you are continueing this story! I have not slept in like...a week? Yeah in like a week ever since I started reading your story, trying to get to the last chapter. I hope Chris goes to jail and get beat up! I love your writing style and the pace, it all looks realistic and all the characters look interesting. I love Misha and his real name, it sounds really hot XD Does Dima have a longer name or is his name actually just Dima? At first I thought Dima was a girl because of his name._. I better shut up before I keep going on and on. -Yer- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'd never thought that would ever happen... And now I'm just itching to see what they'd do to Chris... Would think that Chris would of gotten his ass whooped in jail already? The defense is really making Joni look promiscuous an and imma not liking it at all. Just 1-2 years...I hope they just deport him sooner, rather than later Anyways I like the Joni/Misha fluff... I especially liked the Jami/Ivo its good to see he's getting some lovin'... What's about Jami's friend who knows our lovely little russians and Joni? Eva too... Are you ever gonna bring up Kasper again? I still can't wrap my head around Joni and the army..It seems odd picturing him that way. Anyway I was wondering about the media and that however, when the defense was talking about Joni wanting attention I think he could of just pointed out that he's a hott model... duh... Why would he get his ass beat for attention. stewps... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chris deserves to get his ass kicked in jail, but it's probably more dramatic if there is a hung jury. -sigh- I wish Joni was coping better, but I know it's a long and difficult process since my sister was raped at 15, and became pregnant. Eleven years later and she is still dealing with it, but not like she did in the beginning...Don't worry Joni, It Gets Better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work here! A few misspelled words/grammar blips but all in all, a great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First: I looooove loooong chapters, so thank you. Second: Finally the trial! And I'm constantly berating myself for wanting revenge, wanting Chris being at the receiving end. Grrr, I'm usually not thinking like that. All your fault. Jk. The guy is mentally ill, so he needs help. But Joni, as the victim, needs closure so he can heal. God, I hate quandaries. Help? Good work, as always. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT. would love to read more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, if you wanted to make clear once again how f**** up Chris really is, I'd say you succeeded. Even if someone will hit me for this, but he really is mentally ill and somehow I almost feel sorry for him. *shrugs* Was this your intention or is it just me? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am totally in love with this story. It's taken me ages to catch up but every chapter has been great! I love the deep plot, the characters, and the good timing. So... Yeah, I've enjoyed all of the chapters so far, and greatly look forward to the next ones! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good. Exceptionally good. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to throw this out there. I've been sticking with this story for a long time and still enjoy it. Your writing has grown and your facility with the English language is improving by leaps and bounds. Thanks for continuing the story and not settling for a easy ending. You totally rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh...Dad and the Russian boyfriend are now involved. Things just got heavy, I can't wait! Great work, I cannot wait until Chris is crushed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG oh oh oh oh oh lol, Kolgrim you're going mafia on us now lol, i love it, poor Joni, he really needs the help or its going to damage him seriously. can't wait to see what happens! |