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jessicas favorite stories chapter 44 . 4/3/2011
YAY update,

looking forward to the next XD

getting gooid again lol
aditus chapter 44 . 4/3/2011
I somehow overlooked the last chapter, so I had two to read and I'm glad because after reading ch. 43 I really didn't know whom I wanted to slap up their head first.

I'm glad though that finally Joni did something right, it's quite a relief actually.

The idea alone somebody might kick Chris' a** pleases a more violent side of me I didn't know I had.

Oh and thanks for praising our beer. ;)
miraakira chapter 43 . 4/2/2011
read this on aarin, but i couldn't leave a comment, so thank god i found it here. loved this chap, Chris is so psycho lol, i hope he gets help or he is definitely going to hurt Joni again, or even worse. can't wait for the next update!
JtheChosen1 chapter 43 . 3/29/2011
Wow...Chris is clearly insane.

Wonder if Mischa can pull some strings and get Joni's ex-boyfriend taken care of lol ;)
anonymous chapter 43 . 3/27/2011
hms, this story is kinda dragging... chris needs to just be put away in jail forever and joni needs to just finally GET SMART for once. i hate how this is an unending cycle of joni making dumb decisions and getting himself and those around him hurt and then misha just comes in a saves him all the time. for once joni needs to just THINK. i hate how even till now Chris still has the upper hand. whenever i feel like the story is coming to an end, another incident just pops up and its like all these cycles in the story just never end...
jessicas favorite stories chapter 43 . 3/27/2011
chris is such an ass!

cant wait til the next update.

dont take too long okay?
JtheChosen1 chapter 42 . 2/27/2011
Very good work here! Love to see how Joni is slowly healing and developing his relationship with Misha. Wonder what Chris is doing this whole time lol ;)
aditus chapter 42 . 2/26/2011
Well there are some slight mistakes I don't even remember right now. Not that I'm the English language expert, far from that.

I like this chapter, at the end I almost shouted yay, finally. lol All right, it might be a bit sappy, but aren't we all sometimes when it counts?

There is only one thing I don't like, it's when Misha is sometimes calling Joni 'youth', while thinking of him. I can't imagine calling my lover this w/o feeling being condescending or something. Even if he is young.

Great chapter though, and it was about time... lol
hayleigh12 chapter 42 . 2/25/2011
i love every chapter. review quick!

:) AMAZING
AudreyKW chapter 42 . 2/25/2011
JRAHDGHAKJH

I fucking love these characters. So amazing and such a strong story. You should really think about publishing it!
aditus chapter 41 . 1/8/2011
I liked their playful chat; oh God yes, middle names ugh.

Orks naked! I'll never watch LOTR with the same eyes ever again!

I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

PS. You only need some weird friends to fill your Advent Calendar and you are able to answer these questions. My opinion is: cinnamon is okay, but Christmas cookie flavor? ugh, I didn't taste that, the smell alone...
JtheChosen1 chapter 41 . 12/29/2010
Excellent work here, loved it!

And yay for mentioning LOTRs, those are badass books and movies!
kissedbymidnight chapter 3 . 12/28/2010
*laughs* Poor Joni. He lost to Misha. But it sounds like it will at least amuse us readers.:) This was a good chapter. It was interesting and fun, though not a lot really happened. I’m really starting to like Ivo and his devious plots. It seems like everyone is planning something._ Good description and dialogue.
kissedbymidnight chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Hee. This chapter was good. I like Joni, even though he is kind of full of himself. I think he honestly likes Misha. He just doesn’t realize it yet. Get Misha to ask him out and then refuse? That sounds to me like Misha makes him feel a little powerless, and Joni wants that power back. So far I like all of the brothers. They are different, but fit well together. Joni was lucky that Misha saved him though, he was almost asking for trouble by acting like that. He got what he wanted though: Misha’s attention. I also like how Joni seems to have control issues. It adds to the depth of his character. Good job! There were a few spelling errors, but nothing that really distracted the reader. The dialogue sounded natural.
JtheChosen1 chapter 40 . 12/18/2010
A perfect chapter, always glad to read them! Good to see Joni and Misha's relationship is going to be less turbulent lol!
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