OhMyJez.

I was going to talk about how ADORABLE Ivo and Jami are, but DAMN.

That kiss totally stole the show.

I am SO excited for Joni's birthday.

Which is kind of ridiculous.

But I am.

I hope it's super awesome.

Like always.

:D

xoxoxox,

Ty

Let me first say, Thanks for the response. It was very cool to see your message and then find out that you'd updated the story. NICE. I'm still totally with you on this story and am excited for the conclusion even though it seems like there's still so much more story to tell. I know you'll do it justice.

Another great chapter. I really like how you're dealing with Joni's fear and hesitation with everyone. And it's definitely and interesting choice to have Adam interact with both Joni and Chris, even though I bet most people are wondering how he can still be on speaking terms with Chris, but you explain him well.

I'm also loving the growth in everyone. Keep up the great writing and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I found your story some days ago since then, whenever I found the time, I've been reading a chapter. I think you made me feel almost every emotion I'm able to, although it wasn't always pleasant it was always good. I'd say it's an emotional roller coaster, so well I'm in desperate need of some cotton candy or ice cream now. Then I'll be ready for the next chapter.

~aditus

So cute. Well at least Misha admitted his feelings, however I'm sure its more than just like. Then again those two have been going round and round for 32 chapters its nice taht they are finally getting there.

Finally they admitt it !

Aw.

They are so cute.

I love Misha so muuch.

Holy bals.

Why can't I find a man like that, huh?

haha

xoxoxoxooxx,

Ty

I didn't notice too many mistakes. :) It's just some grammar. It was easy to get through. You don't need to apologize for the unbeta'd-ness.

Finally, Misha! You finally told! There was some trouble before-hand, of course, but at last! I'm so happy...

I feel a little bad for Adam, honestly. :( Misha is being so unfair. I mean, I see where he's coming from, but come on...

And Ivo! I still love you very much. :D Level-headed and awesome, aren't you...

*hearts*

~Maggie/AftG

Very good work here! Slowly everyone is realizing what evil things Chris has done! Excellent job!

Did they finall get together. After all these years T.T(hugs them)

really good story. so much drama and I love the characters. I mean not all of them, but they're all rather believable. You have me hanging on your every word, even the misspelled/misused ones. ;) (some incorrect prepositions and vocabulary) And strangely enough they don't take away from the story. I think that's mainly due to the fact that the story doesn't take place in an English speaking country.

So, hats off to you, and I can't wait to read more. The intensity of the events is stunning and I will admit I shed a few tears. I also laughed out loud. Hard to find that combo in the same story.

Oh Chris is so wrapping Adam around his little finger. I do hope that they find the pics though for it would be really bad if they got out and Joni doesn't need any more of that.

This story is one of the best I've read. You really gave us time to get to know the characters, everything went kind of slowly but it wasn't boring. I love how you made Joni - he's confident, loud, childish and proud. Then when something like this happened to him...you did a really great job, showing how he felt embarrassed, humiliated and then he became withdrawn. It was so realistic! And Chris - wow, that was something, how you created him shows what a talented writer you are. From the very beginning I thought he was a pervert, that something was wrong but still he was okay somehow, he and Joni became a couple, lived together, stayed together for over two years and even Joni's father accepted this relationship. Everything looked okay but as a reader I was wondering all the time - is it going to be okay or is something wrong with Chris. That tension and wondering was cool - not everything was obvious or predictable. The thoughts of Chris while he is in prison - just like some psycho. I'm amazed really, your characters are so real and deep. They are full of emotions and with their own characters, each of them different. Great job. Keep it up and please update soon!

Oh my giddy-od!

I love how intense this story is! You must keep writing!

I've spent the last two- three days reading about Joni and Misha and Chris!

You are a gifted writer! Such emotion I must applaud.

Sorry I must sound a little crazy, but I love finding a good story to read. This one capitvated me.

Just thought I should tell you to keep up the good work! I'm dying to read the chapters to come!

Sincerely,

Channy (from channy'n'tater)

:) I love the Foxy story. Misha is adorable.

Every time I get Chris' perspective, I'm amazed a little more at what a great writer you are, seriously.

It took me too long to get to reading this chapter, but I appreciate the update just as much as ever!

~Maggie, AftG

wow... That was a very dramatic and emotional story even if it was sad at times i loved every second of it except when chris and jone did it (i hated chris even before he started abusing joni i dunno i guess i just liked misha better i still do!)