Reviews for Abyssal Torment
sialgunavez chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
hey! i know it's been a while...busy with school and stuff but i'm on break now yayy. haha. how have you been? thanks so much for reading all my work! it always means a lot :) SOO i think this was a pretty depresing haiku but haha yeah pretty accurate for what's going on today. I don't know how you write haikus, it's hard for me to say all what I want to say in three lines. I think that's pretty impressive. I hope you're doing well!
nickyO chapter 23 . 3/8/2010
The last line of this set rings because of all the words before. Another solid set of poems, although *ouch* :(

I appreciate your ability to put yourself out there and live with these painful feelings even longer by carefully and thoughtfully putting them into verse.
nickyO chapter 12 . 3/8/2010
Love the title of this chapter. Good work, see you made no muse a muse.
nickyO chapter 3 . 3/8/2010
I like the analogy, that the time we don't put into a friendship causes pain and lonliness.
steffxnie chapter 19 . 12/11/2009
Great haiku! Love the expressions!

However I don't like the description of 'lovely darkness'. It doesn't fit well in this piece. But this is good. :D
steffxnie chapter 15 . 12/11/2009
This is lovely as well.

'spilling tears of soft stars' is really pretty.

The personification 'anguish saw you' is good as well. ;)
steffxnie chapter 6 . 12/11/2009
I love this one. It's just simply amazing.