Reviews for Darkness Within
MallowsWins chapter 2 . 1/20/2017
Very interesting word use. 'Turns to false' seems like a strange phrase, but it works in the context of this haiku. I love the second line, very powerful. Sacrifice is a strong word.

Very cool, keep writing!
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
I dig the ominous tone of this haiku, very forbidding. Love the last line, too.