|Reviews for landing|
| AROSEO chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
beautiful and heartbreaking
| this is britt chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
this is gorgeous. the first paragraph is genius. "like a plateful of food in your face and you've forgotten how to eat." every line is a keeper.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
your 2nd stanza is great I love the phrase about jeweled future.
| lost for words chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I like how you end with a continuation of the metaphor you started with. "melting in the dinner pot for fate" -interesting idea there.