Reviews for Name Me Disenchantment
deepmind chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
BETTER LET GO OF YOUR PAST, AND START LOVING YOURSELF,ALOT MORE.

RESPECT WILL FOLLOW, DONT ALLOW YOURSELF TO BE SO SHALLOW.

NEVER GIVE TO BE ACCEPTED, IF YOU FOLLOW FLOCKS TO DECEPTION,

YOU DENY YOURSELF TO FLY FREE AND PERFECTED.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Here's your review because you gave me the extra RG review... sorry it took so long.

Anyhow I like this piece a lot. I like how it goes from longer lines to the short ones. And I love the descriptions in the beginning. My favorite was the first line of the second stanza, the imagery was great as was the alliteration.

The only thing is the second line in the second to last stanza... I dunno the foxes just seemed to not fit in. Unless I'm missing some symbolism.
Amethyst Lin chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
The first lines seemed to lead into a lighter poem but then transitioned into a downward feeling. It was beautiful! A definite confession of the soul.
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Oh, this was just so beautiful. It was so much more than I thought it would be.