|Reviews for Headphones|
| Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
This poem would be perfect if it weren't for the imperfect punctuation :p use brackets instead of dashes, and you missed a semi-colon :p
I can see how you feel, and sympathise with it, having felt the same way many times :)
Bless you :)
| Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
...Headphone withdrawl. Wow-amazingly creative.
I'm blown away once again, Lady Glass!
Just one correction-the lines "Where, if the volume is just right/ I can just pretend that everything's alright" sound a little awkward (both ending in 'right') and you could probably rework that.
Otherwise, this is really fantastic. I love the stanza starting with "I am very sorry" because it's easy to relate to and I thought the strongest lines were "But honestly, don't worry/That's not just low self esteem talking" because they held so much meaning in this context.