|Reviews for stop look go|
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
i love this, every little bit. it's gorgeous. i wish i could say more, but i'm in absolute awe.
| Doxology chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
I love this poem. Although I have to admit I think it would've been even better if you hadn't said it was inspired by Cobain. Perosnally, I had my own (personal) thoughts about it (interpretations, meanings) and Cobain had probably already slipped in there anyway. But...I love this poem.
| The Sleep Of Reason chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
A tribute to narcissus loved me
How I love your poetry so
I just want to know
Where I can go
To get inspiration
So I can write
In the middle of the night
Something that will at least be
Half as good as yours
Have I mentioned I love your work?
| Written chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
wow, beautiful. It can be about kurt cobain, but it can also be about any other guy like him. I loved it!
also, I like your penname :)
| the big crunch chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
'while the leaves outside continued to sway,
while April crept carefully onto May.'
that has to be one of the most beautiful lines i have ever read.