Reviews for stop look go
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
i love this, every little bit. it's gorgeous. i wish i could say more, but i'm in absolute awe.
Doxology chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
I love this poem. Although I have to admit I think it would've been even better if you hadn't said it was inspired by Cobain. Perosnally, I had my own (personal) thoughts about it (interpretations, meanings) and Cobain had probably already slipped in there anyway. But...I love this poem.


The Sleep Of Reason chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
A tribute to narcissus loved me


How I love your poetry so

I just want to know

Where I can go

To get inspiration

Everlasting imagination

So I can write

In the middle of the night

Something that will at least be

Half as good as yours

Have I mentioned I love your work?
Written chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
wow, beautiful. It can be about kurt cobain, but it can also be about any other guy like him. I loved it!

also, I like your penname :)
the big crunch chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
'while the leaves outside continued to sway,

while April crept carefully onto May.'

that has to be one of the most beautiful lines i have ever read.

great poem.