Reviews for Running my heart out
Bavand chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
Wow... I'm almost speechless. Man, darlin, a lot of images and emotions on different levels. I love the idea of the wind being a close friend to "cradle" you without being judgmental, but the last line is my favorite as a fabulous 'punch line' (not a poetic term , but it fits-I like to use punch lines in my poems). I can really relate to wanting to outrun the voices in my head sometimes. Keep on writing.

Julie
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
I know, it's not really meant to be, but that poem -to me- depicted nature well! The detail in it was great.
Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
one word: awesome.