|Reviews for Bits, Bobs, Odds, and Ends|
| nickyO chapter 9 . 12/8/2009
:) Smiles to the rhyme.
| nickyO chapter 7 . 12/8/2009
I like the second line you prefer, what about "drunk on embarrassment, I, " or "we" or "you" ? Whichever intent you're going for.
| nickyO chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
You could make a new rule about how long it should take to brush your teeth...as long as it takes to write a haiku. :) Good job.