Reviews for Conceptual Reality
nickyO chapter 4 . 12/3/2009
Until you explained this one I didn't understand. I really like the idea although. It might be one of those cases where the Haiku needs to be broken in order to truly express the image/idea, or maybe play with it a little more.

Please know however, I'm not the brightest bulb in the light fixture not getting it at first could be all on me. So take my suggestions with a grain of salt.