|Reviews for Eat Too Much|
| MyWorldisBlack chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
and sometimes you dont even realise you've eaten too much until a few hours later after you've eaten even more xD
| Written chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
heheheh, look at our pennames! you're like notme.
This was a cute poem :) it was a bit repetitive, but I feel like that sort of added flow to it. I feel like ending each sentence in a punctuation mark keeps it a bit stilted, however.
| babygeek310 chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Fun poem, made me smile. Short and sweet that's the way a poem should be!