|Reviews for Not Yet Sleeping|
| Gollummullog chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Looking for Alaska was an AMAZING book. I cried so hard. -
As an insomniac, I get random thoughts flying through my head. XD
You expressed that excellently in the third stanza - I never seem to be able to organize my tired brain and make something good happen with all that insane tired energy. o_o
Nice work. I also particularly like L4 & L5; they're quite accurate. It's nice to read the work of a fellow insomniac. It makes me feel connected to the speaker.
| deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
heh good point. Nice poem ;)
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
THe second stanze really doesn't fit with the rest of the poem. BUt i know what you mean when you can't sleep. lI too suffer from insomnia. But not just random moments. I really suffer. And I find that I write at my best when at night.
I is funny. I think it's Grenne. Not too sure. I've read the book too. made me cry.
Keep up the good work!