|Reviews for Damaged|
| a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
"sadistic tendencies"... "but you learn to conceal yourself from them, / the way you erased all emotion-"; I hope you're not talking about me? *weak laugh*
Anyway, this is a very powerful poem. The motherfuckers will have to deal with the consequences of their behaviour and treatment.
Very nice job, anyway. *adds to favs*
| paradisgatan chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Oh, wow. This is great work. It might sound odd, but what stood out to me most about this poem was the detail. "On cracked windowsill." Brilliant. Truth is in the details, I guess. They put the reader /right there/ in the image. I love the last line, too, "who knew there was destruction in safety?" It's a compelling thought, and definitely more novel than the usual FP fare. Captivating from beginning to end. Kudos.