|Reviews for Wait What?|
| your nightmare chapter 19 . 7/9/2012
great story! i totally loved how you made who lexi would end up with a mystery until the end. i hate stories where you can totally just predict who they are going to end up with. and cole sounds really hot and cute. i wouldn't mind dating him myself. anyways, great work!
| SlugHunter chapter 19 . 12/6/2010
okay so honestly i wasn't hoping for much when i clicked on this XD like the first chapter was so... uh... un engaging? i understand you wanted to establish scenes and people and such... but personally a good first chapter is a good impression that keeps me reading (honestly i skimmed it briefly and skipped to second chapter XP)
but anyways after that i have to say you are awesome! i loved reading it _ and you do dialogue/character interactions really well! i loved each of their personalities! _ and also when u revealed cole/nick was a virgin that was a pleasant surprise XD
i must say i also like dom but i'm glad you went with cole for me that made it less cliche and more nice XD although their breakup was a little sudden for me *shrugs* i dunno how to explain so to summarise overall: is good. i like :D XD
just some things i picked up while reading, for future reference i guess XD
i think you get confused with their, there, they're
their: (possession) they went back to their lives
there: (place) bring me that book over there
they're: (they are) they're arguing again
and then also your to's sometimes you use "too" instead of 'to'
oh and i think the phrase is "could have fooled me" rather than "could have fouled me"
and sometimes there are just some slip ups which can be solved with some editing like i think at one point you had "commits" instead of "comments" *shrug* i'm doing this off memory :P
xD i hope you take this as constructive criticism _
i think you are an amazing writer! the story overall was so engaging and easy to keep reading XD so congratulations on finishing it thankyou for sharing it with the rest of us _
| naturewise chapter 19 . 5/31/2010
i just read this story.i really liked it!are you thinking of writing emma's and dom's story?that would be really interesting!
| Dead Deactivated chapter 19 . 4/16/2010
FAncy pancy :D I liked it and hope for a sequel
| teenagedirtbagbaby chapter 19 . 9/30/2009
that was incredible :3
i couldn't stop reading it! and im really really happy that she ended up with cole.
good job, you're a really talented writer (:
| notyourbiz chapter 19 . 9/22/2009
You know what i'm going to say right? I wanted Dom to get her. I mean yeah I like cole, but dom was just a more prominate figure in the story :) I don't think you should do a story on Dom and emma because they really don't fit. The part about them getting together just seemed like a way to tie up the loose ends. I don't think dom was meant to settle down and he'll probably be a player till he dies. But, he's the one I love :) Dom for life ;)
| Silken Silver Berries chapter 19 . 9/7/2009
hey. so i'm sorry i haven't reviewed for ages. i was reading the chapters. the ending was fantastic. the second-last, non-epilogue chapter was fantastic. loved it. :) ...can't say i'm crazy about making out in a restaurant but who knows, if i was on a date with the guy i'd been in love with for ages, i'd probably do the same thing. lol. i'm just not much for PDA. anyway... great stuff, loved it :)
| xrawritskalix chapter 19 . 9/3/2009
Wow, I absolutely love how you ended this story. I just want to ask one thing though. Is it weird that I never really liked Dom at all? I mean not with Lexi at least. Well, I hope it's not at least. I'm obviously really glad you had her end up with Cole. They seem like such a great couple! I think it'd be a good idea if you wrote a sequel to this, whether it was centered around different characters or not. But anyways, keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more stories by you. :D
| Anara Celebvilya chapter 19 . 8/25/2009
THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! I'm really sad that it's over, but at the same time it couldn't have gone on for much longer without turning weird or bad. Thanks for a great read!
| Novella Vialli chapter 19 . 8/20/2009
Great story! Enjoyed till the end!
| AmandaHold chapter 19 . 8/13/2009
I really liked this story. I expecially loved the ending. You had said about possibily writing a sequal...Did you ever think to maybe write one about Cole/Nick and Lexi in the future? And where all the other guys are say 10 or 15 years later? Just an idea.
| hokeypokeyjones chapter 19 . 8/13/2009
That story was RIDICULOUS. I can't believe I read the whole thing.
I seriously think you should attend some English lessons and fix up your grammar.
Just so you know...
There's a difference between "your" and "you're"
There's a difference between "two", "too" and "to"
There's a difference between a good story and a dreadful one, in which case, yours was dreadful.
And the ending was totally predictable. It sucked.
Anyway, thanks for wasting my time. Kisses!
| 3DarkGoddess3 chapter 19 . 8/12/2009
I really loved this story. I loved all the characters. It is really good. It would be cool if you wrote about any of the other characters but I don't really care for the whole Dom/Emma thing. They don't fit in my eyes. Derik would be interesting to read about I think.
| Kina Kalamari chapter 19 . 8/10/2009
That was an excellent way to wrap things up. I like the way you went through and told what happened to everyone. It helped conclude things better, I think. Anyway, wonderful job on this whole story. I've really enjoyed reading it. )
| liseymarie94 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
i really want to make a movie out of this. :) i think i mite if that's okay. lol