I've read the one sho t you're talking about. But I don't remember it's name either. :(

I just wanted to say that while I really really love your story, the story you were talking about (that was written entirely in dialogue) is called Hanging by pixy-dizzy

OMIGOD NO I HALF WANT TO KILL THAT OTHER GIRK AKA SECRETARY AND HALF WANT TO HUG HER AKDSJFALKSDJFALKJFDKAJFD;LKAJFDSLK . that was so well written! this is amazing!

:)

geez, I'm almost in tears. The emotion portrayed in this piece is amazing. I love the originality and honesty.

WOW!i luved it! its very unusual to not have a happy ending its a good get away if youve been reading Clichés for a long time and simply need sumtin different..oh and i was wonderin if u found da stry u wanted coz ive read sumtin with da same plot and its called Hanging by pixxy-dizzy...

Keep Writin

Lots of love

Freak Of Music!

this made me feel like crying.

This was better written compared to The Girlfriend's point of view which I read before this. That one was good. I like stories which explore different characters and although I'm a fan of cliche, I appreciate cliche with human emotions more. This would sort of have fallen under cliche had the point of view been that of the secretary's(keyword: sort of, maybe it would have maybe not, I'm not quite the judge in that matter :) Cliche or not, I still would read it.). But for you to take the POV of the girl who was left behind, I must say, this story was very well-written. There's human emotion, human weakness and strength (these traits are so hard to find on online stories nowadays). How I wish online novels would be written this way because a creative plot is somehow wasted if the characters are not believable. So from that, I'm simply implying that your characters are very human with traits we could totally relate to and I really felt something from them. (I'm not only referring to this story, the characters from your other stories as well are good, although I have yet to read all. But so far, I haven't been disappointed. :D

This is already good but I'm sure if you decide to edit this one day, you'd find something you would want to improve on (I don't know which part that is but maybe you'll find something to better this already lovely piece). As much as I want this to be a full novel, I also do not want it to be more than a one-shot. One of this story's beauty lies in its length. It's short but I think it's powerful enough.

I'm actually more of a series and full novel reader. I read one-shots but ever so rarely because they leave me hanging. It's just because of schedule issues that I'm looking for one-shots to satisfy my sudden need for romance stories. hahaha. It was really nice to have come across your work.

I hope to read more from you and I guess I've written quite a long review now so I'm ending this and I'm off to read more of your stories.

-acira

damn. this story is making me depressed. i got carried away and sirt of cried in this story. damn, that was so good! i can feel it.:D anyway, well done!:D

this made my heart ache, really

it's awfully painful to lose the person you love to another person, and if it happened to me, i'm not sure i'd forgive them..

your writing is amazing, btw, and i couldn't stop reading it, the one-shot was so realistic and vivid that i was pulled into it.

keep writing~

that. was. amazing.

and sad.

but nice closure (:

That was gorgeous. I absolutely loved it...the heartbreak, the love, the insecurity, all of it. Amazing job. Really, absolutely excellent.

i so love this one too!

AW... that aws so... emotional and well written! So human too. Fate, true love, all that stuff is so complicated adn confusing, you never know what will happen... but you always have to listen to your heart and your conscience, not yoru desires :)

this is written beautifully!

i love it!