|Reviews for Carnal Sin|
| bahaghari chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
dark and sexy.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
great piece, very solid and the emotions and imagery are great. Keep it up :)
| onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
haha.. sounds like a LK. H book but w/o all the "other stuff". I like how this one flowed except maybe the very last line... I almost feel like it should flow as "a sealed kiss.." or sth like that. But thats just me. It's a great poem. b
ps: gomen..had probs signing in & too lazy to do a pwd recovery thin...