Hello, I enjoyed reading your story! I know it has been a few years since completed, but there are some major typos and a few story line errors in there. For example, in the beginning you said that Michelle was in the same grade as Harper but in later chapters said she was just entering senior year. Also such errors as 'she shit the door'. While they made me laugh are not purposefully written. :) cute story and I hope you take the time to review it
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Hello, I enjoyed reading your story! I know it has been a few years since completed, but there are some major typos and a few story line errors in there. For example, in the beginning you said that Michelle was in the same grade as Harper but in later chapters said she was just entering senior year. Also such errors as 'she shit the door'. While they made me laugh are not purposefully written. :) cute story and I hope you take the time to review it

SAVE THE STORY. Oh wait, its finished (:

Just another good chappie.

I like the scenes with Chase and Harper being all couple-y. Their cute.

I'm liking the Chase and Harper bonding.

I like the bimbos. Not them as a character just the drama they bring. Drama is good.

Still liking it..

Ooh... Drama... Good drama...

I'm liking it a lot

I'm liking it...

I hated that they liked the arranged marriage, but now that you add that they didnt take over the buisness i like it. Sequel about michelle or caleb. Good story. :)

they're not best friends? i'm confused...

great story.

like the story.

i'm not offended about the arranged marriage, but it isn't only india... (i am indian) there r other asian countries...

Aww it's done, it's finally over sigh. Great job tho, I really love it :)