Reviews for The Adventures of Handsome Hero
Dark Meister chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
LOL, I had a really good laugh reading this. XD
TheEntertainer26 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
LOLburgerism - there was nothing flawed about that! What a great story! I rarely laugh but here we have some 5 star comedy. By the by, I think their names are great.

fatbird33 chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
HA! i loved the end where the evil one had to do community service. clever!
Reaper chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
That was quite possibly the stupidest, cliched, and best thing I have ever read. Request moar!

Rainbow Pineapple chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Okay, then. That was weird! And funny! Well, come to think of it, most weird stuff is funny, and most funny stoff is weird, so... GAH! I'M GETTING OFF TOPIC! THIS HAPPENS WITH BASICALLY ALL OF THE STORIES I REVIEW!

lol, I like how hero was named 'Handosome Hero'. It's a total cliche to have heros be handsome, lol. Except of course Batman, he is in no way handsome and... GRR! WHY DO I ALWAYS GET OFF TOPIC?

Anyway, this was funny! I'd lie to read more by you!
dinodaw chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
hm it was it was good but I found one thing but I think you fixed that anywho you need to write a another story not a handsome hero story something else

Rayder99 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
I think that you should do another Handsome Hero story
Ms. Critic chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Ah, you kept to my guidelines (tear) I'm so proud! Keep writing I'm finding some great potential here. And I read your profile. Am I really that morbid?
Beluga1 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
laugh, laugh, i like!
blackberrydream chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Wow. That was hilarious! Everything was so...cleverly named. The joke about the father was surprisingly funny considering that's kind of overused but you put a nice twist on it and the "Do you have any idea how expensive funerals are!" Was the best line ever! Great job!

The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
That was REALLY good! I'm SO glad that you posted it! and I only saw one error in the entire thing and that was in the 9th paragraph from the end you used the wrong "to' it should have been "They soon got too close, and with a flip, ...", but that's probably the best of any story I've read in a long time! And although in some part (the begining especially) the humor was a tiny bit too sparse, it turned out to be HILARIOUS at the end and endings are really the most important part! So overall, GOOD JOB!

Write on!
R.E.D. the animator chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
LOL! That's much funnier than other stories on FP. My favorite part was where The Evil One fell only ten feet down.