Reviews for Natalie
Mindscrew Min-Min chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I like the perspective shift towards the end. Great story with some good emotions.

Poor Natalie in the beginning though. I wouldn't have left her like that. Then again, though, I'm a teratophiliac, ha!
DA-Amanda chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Well, I wouldn't ever kill anyone, but I can understand Natalie's motivations, that husband is a...a-hem you-know-wha...to leave her because of a SCAR!

Interesting, well written too.
fleece-rot chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
She's gonna get caught! She didn't even use gloves!
Ecaterina Dracula chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
HOLY CRAP! WONDERFULY SADISTIC!
Stopdamadness chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This story is great, and the ending was superb. Update soon.
Vincent Milensky chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
SHE-DEVIL
im.a.werewolf.rawr chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Wonderfully gruesome! I love it! I totally wasn't expecting that to be her husband. I mean, it's a rather expected ending, but you pulled it off in the most unexpected way. Nice work!
HealingWords chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Wow! i JUST loved that opening to the chapter. Its got me hooked! Update soon.!
Kar-zid chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Awesome story, Jake didn't seem very nice, leaving his wife because of a stupid scar. What Natalie did to him was sick, gory and very well written!